Research about film making project

The above video is a film opening seen produced and directed by an Alevel student.From my evaluation it was a good piece of work.Camera angles were used accurately which illustrated the closeup scenes and others quite efficiently.However,their were few scenes like "when the girls were going to sit on the bench" type cameraman should have taken a low angle shot with a mid closeup shot on the bench which would have made the scene classy.

Sound composition and editing was done nicely with less to no glitches in between.
Editing work was done elegantly and their were smooth transition between scenes.Also the intro of the film was good.
Thats my so-far evaluation of this film opening.
I will be posting more film openings for researching and for learning basis.